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Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2023 3:06 am
by Elver
I'm not seeing any particular place to post these sorts of minor issues, so to avoid thread clutter I'd propose any time someone finds one they post it here, along with the version it came from, and the version the game started in. I'll start.
Scenario build 1.20h, game build 1.20o:
In the (positive) resolution of the Cultural Exchange of special refugees decision, the major regime who's sending the refugees is referred to by the variable name.
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2023 9:44 pm
by Magirot
[1.20s] Description of the
Banker Ally Fate Stratagem reads:
- I will charge no interest. Impose no repayments. Le me help you...
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2023 12:17 am
by Magirot
[1.20s]
SE_Perks library, Perks table
Row 4
(Small Degraded AF),
typo in description:
- What the ancients consider small, is actually extremely humungous for our times. The problem is this Automated Factory spawning several square kilometers is in ruins and severely degraded. However it has some minor systems operational and a sizeable production capability. IP +80.
spawning should be
spanning
("hum
ongous" would look more standard than "hum
ungous"? Also would probably be fine without "extremely"!)
Row 5
(Hermits Cave),
name:
- Hermits Cave should be Hermit's Cave, I think? Though Google gives results without the apostrophe I think it's nonstandard.
Row 7
(Ancient Luxury Resort),
typos in description:
- Hidden between the natural curves of the landscape and ancient luxury resort is still semi-operational. It has hot-baths and still operational entertainment suites. Your leaders love the privilleg to visit. PP +1.
"and" should be
"an";
privilege typo
Row 8
(Monastry),
name and description:
- Monastry should be Monastery, both in name and description.
(only the last one has bothered me but I thought it might be better to try to go over the whole table in one go)
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2023 4:50 pm
by PersonyPerson
Here's some typo's I've noticed. I might be being pedantic, but might as well keep a record of them.
[1.20q]
MTH wants more embedded staff event:"
burocratic" should be "
bureaucratic"
Minor regime demands an oath of peace event: reject it, you get the below message. "
severly" should be "
severely"
National Budget allocation event: A space just before "
Your Council Directors" and "
eachother" should be "
each other". Add a "
the" between
win and
budget?
MTH offering to buy IP event: accept it and get the below message. "
upto" should be "
up to."

Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2023 6:23 pm
by Magirot
Colonize screen, message for Disband if you've selected a Zone other than the SHQ Zone:
- You have x Recruits at SHQ. Upon disbanding they will join the Population of the Zone where the SHQ is present. You have Recruits, but you cannot Disband them in the selected Zone. Please select the Zone where the SHQ is present Disband Recruits.
Should have
"to" before the last two words.
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2023 12:42 pm
by Magirot
I wonder if Oceania Planetary Class Artica is supposed to be Arctica?
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2023 10:44 pm
by Moat_Man
Magirot wrote: ↑Thu Apr 27, 2023 12:42 pm
I wonder if Oceania Planetary Class
Artica is supposed to be
Arctica?
I wondered that myself.
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2023 1:37 am
by mroyer
Moat_Man wrote: ↑Thu Apr 27, 2023 10:44 pm
Magirot wrote: ↑Thu Apr 27, 2023 12:42 pm
I wonder if Oceania Planetary Class
Artica is supposed to be
Arctica?
I wondered that myself.

I've been reading it as Arctica and didn't even notice it didn't have the 'c' until just now...
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2023 9:28 am
by Emx77
Subvocalizer Tower asset (in description)
Produces: 2 popHapiness, 2 workerHapiness, should be 2 popHappiness, 2 workerHappiness.
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Tue May 02, 2023 1:47 pm
by Vic
Thanks guys. Will make a pass soon.
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Fri May 19, 2023 8:58 am
by Hardradi
Minor typo on both the casualty lines:

Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Sat May 27, 2023 6:42 am
by Moat_Man
Minor typo in the history log of a governor.
Staid should be Stayed

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Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2023 3:47 pm
by alocritani
[1.20q #174]Constant name in HighCommand detail window tooltip (and the link itself is Formula1 that seems another placeholder)

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Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2023 1:48 am
by Magirot
Transport Contract dialog box text reads "Howmany" instead of "How many", though with the full sentence it would probably be better if it was
"How
much transport capacity for how long a period of time would you like to contract?"
Meanwhile, in the unit upgrade, scrap and replace dialogs, it'd just need a space.

Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2023 12:57 pm
by alocritani
[1.21d] Bluepint screen for aircraft/copters

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range is
too small
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2023 8:55 pm
by alocritani
Too insted of to, delegate screen

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Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2023 8:01 pm
by alocritani
Shadow spy feat's tooltip says a Special Ops skill roll bonus is applied but the skill is called Covert ops.

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Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2023 3:13 pm
by Magirot
Should be "
proper" and "
breach".
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2023 12:09 pm
by alocritani
That's from bottom bar, zone tab, zone administration mode butto: should be unincorporated
Re: Typos & disfluencies
Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2023 10:58 pm
by Magirot
1.21h, assumedly in j too:
First row reads "guys" instead of "guy".