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RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:37 pm
by jesperpehrson
Communication established with Pclem
On other news communications with the rest of the authors has started again after Christmas and it seems like all are alive and well (except me. I quit tobacco so I feel more less dying. [:@]). Expect some screenshots in the close future. [:D]
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:05 pm
by jesperpehrson
I will post 5 screenies from the latest batch of writeups.
First out are the Swiss!

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:06 pm
by jesperpehrson
The second Swiss

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:07 pm
by jesperpehrson
An Italian division

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:08 pm
by jesperpehrson
and finally a Romanian Armour (and oops I said 5 but I meant 4

)

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 1:28 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
Nice.
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:11 am
by Hairog
I don't want to be a party pooper and you guys are really doing some fantastic work on these but........is this causing the game to be delayed in anyway?
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 5:24 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
ORIGINAL: Hairog
I don't want to be a party pooper and you guys are really doing some fantastic work on these but........is this causing the game to be delayed in anyway?
Nope. I read them all, but that's about it for my involvement.
This is one of the few items I can delegate to others and not worry about. Back in 2005 I wrote the code for displaying these on one of the player interface forms (Unit Review) for the air units. Later I cloned that code to handle the naval and land units. I also added some formatting codes to make them look nicer but all the formatting code already existed to display text for tutorials and context sensitive help (e.g., for the optional rules). This is just glitz which doesn't interact/affect game play at all. Nor does it interact with Internet, PBEM, AIO, etc..
At this point I simply point new volunteers to either Capitan (Land) or Terje (Naval).
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 7:53 am
by Norden_slith
Hi,
it says "rearmed with Tiger Tanks (PzIIIN and PZIVG) in 1942". Thats gotta be a typo, as the two types are not tigers and the very first Tigers came in late 1942, but not to "minor Allies", (but independent battalions, as far as I can remember).
It's probably "German tanks" or something.
Norden
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 8:18 am
by jesperpehrson
ORIGINAL: Hairog
I don't want to be a party pooper and you guys are really doing some fantastic work on these but........is this causing the game to be delayed in anyway?
It is a valid question of course but as Steve said he is out of the production on these nowadays.
I believe that the write-ups do add a dimension to the game that will be much appreciated. If not then I am at least having a blast learning all kinds of stuff

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:00 am
by jesperpehrson
The fifth screenie

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:01 am
by jesperpehrson
I will add another one for good measure!

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:39 pm
by mldtchdog
ORIGINAL: Norden
Hi,
it says "rearmed with Tiger Tanks (PzIIIN and PZIVG) in 1942". Thats gotta be a typo, as the two types are not tigers and the very first Tigers came in late 1942, but not to "minor Allies", (but independent battalions, as far as I can remember).
It's probably "German tanks" or something.
Norden
Good catch. Just double checked my scources to make sure that I had the correct year and the mistake is mine. I'll correct. Thankyou.
-Adam
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:28 am
by DanielAnsell
Are you still looking for volunteers to do write-ups?
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 6:00 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
ORIGINAL: Carny
Are you still looking for volunteers to do write-ups?
Yes. There are both land and naval units that need writeups.
If you would like to help, ...
For land units, send a personal message (PM) to Capitan, for naval, send a PM to Terje439.
Steve
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 10:49 am
by jesperpehrson
Vive la France! Patrice (not Forno) has sent me this very nice write-up! Enjoy and expect some more screenies in a not too distant future.

RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 12:20 pm
by pclem
Hey, nice to see it "real" !!! [:D]
If anybody has a comment about the writeup (what's good, what's bad), don't hesitate to let me know.
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 12:49 pm
by Froonp
Vive la France! Patrice (not Forno) has sent me this very nice write-up! Enjoy and expect some more screenies in a not too distant future.
Can't believe this. There is another Patrice !!!
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 1:19 pm
by jesperpehrson
ORIGINAL: Froonp
Vive la France! Patrice (not Forno) has sent me this very nice write-up! Enjoy and expect some more screenies in a not too distant future.
Can't believe this. There is another Patrice !!!
There can be only one... [X(]
RE: Unit Descriptions: Air, Naval, Land
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 6:10 pm
by Shannon V. OKeets
Very nice, indeed. You asked for comments, these are all about English grammar:
- one of the ... consequences
- ... which consisted
- B Army was renamed
- .. characteristic was that
- it started incorporating
- ... lack of landing ships made this impossible and it wasn't until the 15th of August 1944 that it happened.
- After much fighting
As for the content of the writeup, it is excellent with nice detail and well balanced with a supporting overview of the context of operations overall within which the unit acted. Thank you for your fine contribution.