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RE: Manual Chapter
Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:56 am
by Adam Parker
LOL. Not to mention that Bletchley actually caught a plurals mix too: "the CV... are". Oh well [:)]
RE: Manual Chapter
Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 3:22 pm
by Tzar007
It's not a big deal, but as Bletchley noted, I also believe some proofreading would be required.
Some sentences are written out in a weird way such as this one on page 129: The combat value displayed on the counters and as the initial CV in the combat resolution window can be radically different from the modified CV shown at the end of the battle, not only due to combat losses, but due to the many random factors and leader rating checks that occur to determine the modified combat value.
I had to read that twice before figuring it out. I believe some punctuation would help there.
But anyway, don't hold up the release for that, a corrected manual can easily be put inside a patch [:)]
RE: Manual Chapter
Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:44 pm
by Adam Parker
They've got the weekend, I'm sure someone can go over it with a fine tooth comb before release.
Clarity will be important here as will the least amount of fluff possible.