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RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:23 pm
by composer99
Looks good.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:35 pm
by Froonp
ORIGINAL: Shannon V. OKeets
4th and last in the series. When we have the naval one polished, I'll post that too.
I've corrected the error in the text in this one ("white numbers" for the 14 Chinese Reserve Army).
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:45 pm
by wosung
ORIGINAL: Shannon V. OKeets
Yes, there are that many different land unit types. And typically special code for each one of them for movement and combat.
Army Group and Army both as XXXX?
The former should be XXXXX, like Manstein.
Regards
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:46 pm
by wosung
Btw: really beautiful counters!
Regards
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:55 pm
by Shannon V. OKeets
ORIGINAL: wosung
Btw: really beautiful counters!
Regards
Thanks. They are exactly what are shown on the screen at highest zoom.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 8:07 pm
by Froonp
ORIGINAL: wosung
Army Group and Army both as XXXX?
The former should be XXXXX, like Manstein.
I've corrected that error too. Thanks Wosung !
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:31 pm
by brian brian
I thought the Finnish MECH was actually elite? terribly minor point.
Excellent work, thank y'all as always!
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 12:53 am
by doctormm
How does MWiF display the Sunderland flying boat sub hunter?
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 1:11 am
by Arron69
maybe tell that the attacknumber in brackets is defensive only?
Besides that wosung is right really nice counters.
Edit: typos.
Andi.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 2:16 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
Comme c'est.

RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 2:17 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
ORIGINAL: Graf Zeppelin
maybe tell that the attacknumber in brackets is defensive only?
Besides that wosung is right really nice counters.
Edit: typos.
Andi.
That is done 2 units above.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:01 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
Here are some more Help pages by Patrice.

RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:03 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
Like those for the units, I will add these to the end of the tutorial on the map as summaries. They will also be part of the player's manual.

RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:05 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
These have some overlap with the tutorial on combat, but I think placing them altogether will make them easier to find when the player wants to reference them.

RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:07 am
by Shannon V. OKeets
4th and last in the series. I want to revise a lot of this text. There is plenty of room and the terseness of the English here makes it seem quite stilted - in some cases even grammatically incorrect.

RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 10:52 am
by Jimm
Looks salivatingly good.
Perhaps mention the antiair factor as well as AT for the motorised AA on the land unit display?
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 3:33 pm
by doctormm
ORIGINAL: Shannon V. OKeets
Comme c'est.
<snip pic of Sunderland>
Can something about that be added to the help pages? If space is an issue, replace the Gabbiano, and use the Seiku as an example of a flying boat and primary/secondary designation.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 5:10 pm
by Plainian
The C-54 could possibly be dropped from the chart. The Ohka has a Defensive Air Rating and the Me323 has Transport Ratings which can be used.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 5:22 pm
by Froonp
ORIGINAL: Plain Ian
The C-54 could possibly be dropped from the chart. The Ohka has a Defensive Air Rating and the Me323 has Transport Ratings which can be used.
For the moment, I updated the bitmap by changing the text for the subhunter's factors. I'm loathe to add a third one to the bitmap, especially because there are only a couple of counters in the case of the Sunderland, and there are already 2 subhunters on the bitmap.
I added the mention of AA factor to the AA unit too.
RE: MWiF Tutorial
Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 10:22 pm
by Peter Stauffenberg
ORIGINAL: Shannon V. OKeets
4th and last in the series. I want to revise a lot of this text. There is plenty of room and the terseness of the English here makes it seem quite stilted - in some cases even grammatically incorrect.
I wonder about point 9. The text says "Lake hexsides.....". But the only terrain using note #9 is all sea hex sides. So should the text be changed to "All sea hexsides....."?