Just a few problems.
As I said regarding the spinning galaxy, missing a comma after the race name in the biases.txt
Yours:
22, Alareen 0, 0,-10,-10, 10, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0,-10, 0, 0, 10,-10, 10, 0,-10, 0, 10
Should be:
22, Alareen, 0, 0,-10,-10, 10, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0,-10, 0, 0, 10,-10, 10, 0,-10, 0, 10
Missing two comma's in the character file.
Yours:
0, Evara Senal, 1, , Alareen 10, 15, 6, 30, 11, 20, 0, 0 9, 39, 4
Should be:
0, Evara Senal, 1, , Alareen, 10, 15, 6, 30, 11, 20, 0, 0, 9, 39, 4
Missing the pirate folder (and the pirate policy files that should be in that folder) in the policy folder
Troop images are incorrectly numbered, there marked as 38 and should be 22
Race image incorrectly numbered, marked as 38 in the race file and raceimages folder and should be 22
Troop and race images should be numbered with the same number as the race is setup with in the biases.txt file.
You have used 43 for the shipimages folder, I would suggest changing that to 27 as that is the first slot open to a custom race for ship images, by having a logical order to things you will cut down on mistakes and confusion.
I am sure others have different views on this but these are things I know that work, like the policy folder and its pirate sub folder, it may not be needed but it makes good sense to put it in there along with the races pirate policy file, hence my checklist, it just ensures that you are just covering all the bases and providing all the basic / default files used by a race. Also following a logical numbering system for the new race, IE using the race number defined in the biases.txt for race and troop image.
I have not checked for changes in the Alareen.txt race file (except for the race image number and ship image folder) or Alareen.txt policy file and would suggest until you really understand the structure of a theme to remove the dialog file and its folder, you need to learn and get running a basic theme first, back it up and add sections in as and when you have a better grasp of how a theme is put together, the dialog file is full of potential landmines with all the variables it has in it.
Right, these are not war words so do not blow a gasket but you should have followed what I wrote in the post I provided the link to, that is, backed up your current folder and started from scratch following the examples I gave, DW is a great game but as I pointed out,
very fragile, once you have learned the basics of putting a theme together you will find these are mistakes that could have been avoided, I know all you want to do is get your own custom race all fired up and running but I can speak from experience that once you have added a new race and it is working you will want to add others, if you have no grasp of how to do that then you will forever be stuck in the problem stage.
Once you have the basic knowledge you will find DW has a real diversity regarding all the options you have for creating races and it can be really enjoyable to create new races with unique features to challenge not only yourself but the default ones that Elliot has created.
On the minus side I have given up for the moment on the idea of posting a guide, I may do later but all I can see at present is my blood pressure going through the roof and face palming myself off my chair [:D]
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