I liked this one. I played it twice...I got slaughtered the first time, and then played smarter and got a Triumph. Nice, fast, action-filled scenario.
What I would do to make it better...
1) To increase the sense of "realism," use some version of the "five paragraph order" format for the Side Briefing. Wikipedia has a brief explanation...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Five_paragraph_order
As you can see, there are various related formats. I generally use a variation borrowed from Harpoon: SEFMEC (SITREP/INTEL, ENEMY FORCES, FRIENDLY FORCES, MISSION, EXECUTION, COMMAND AND SIGNAL)
2) In the briefing, perhaps provide more information on exactly what you want people to shoot at...what targets, if any, are priorities, or should they just try to do as much damage as possible?
3) Unless the Italian bases are in danger, you may not need to include the aircraft on Maintenance, although it does add a bit to the realism to keep them in, either way.
4) Once you eliminate the Albanian fighters, the bases are pretty vulnerable...their defenses will get a few Italian aircraft, but not that many. I'm not sure what can be done to make it more challenging (more AAA guns?), or if it needs to be--maybe that's just the key to winning the scenario--but I thought I should mention it.
Anyway, I hope all this helps.
Mark