Minor typos in the tutorial
Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2004 6:52 am
Hi!
First of all, let me say that the tutorial is IMHO the best way to jump into the game. Richard L. Potter did a great job and we should thank him for his work [&o][&o].
I think that I have found three minor typos in the tutorial:
Page 16:
Line 6 (in the list of potential actions):
- Naval Search Level - 0
- Current Altitude - 1500
- Maximum Range - 0
The Altitude is wrong - it should be '15000' in place for '1500'
(Smart people would have realized immediately that in the screenshot, the correct altitude was shown and even highlighted by a yellow circle - I was desperately trying to figure out how to select 1500 despite the fact that the altitude uses 1000-feet-intervals [;)] )
Page 39:
Line 17:
Logic - You never know, some Japanese ships my try for our main base.
Not absolutely sure here, but shouldn't it 'may' in place for 'my'?
Page 45:
Line 32 (the second line from thebottom):
You will not that none of the vehicles were loaded.
I think that this should be 'note' in place for 'not'
A minor point to the layout:
The yellow text for warnings is very difficult to read when printing the tutorial on my printer - maybe red would have been an alternative choice?
To prevent any misunderstandings:
The tutorial is great, easy to follow and at the same time very informative. It probably contains fewer typos than this post, I just want to help exterminating the few remaining typos.
Kind regards,
Roland
First of all, let me say that the tutorial is IMHO the best way to jump into the game. Richard L. Potter did a great job and we should thank him for his work [&o][&o].
I think that I have found three minor typos in the tutorial:
Page 16:
Line 6 (in the list of potential actions):
- Naval Search Level - 0
- Current Altitude - 1500
- Maximum Range - 0
The Altitude is wrong - it should be '15000' in place for '1500'
(Smart people would have realized immediately that in the screenshot, the correct altitude was shown and even highlighted by a yellow circle - I was desperately trying to figure out how to select 1500 despite the fact that the altitude uses 1000-feet-intervals [;)] )
Page 39:
Line 17:
Logic - You never know, some Japanese ships my try for our main base.
Not absolutely sure here, but shouldn't it 'may' in place for 'my'?
Page 45:
Line 32 (the second line from thebottom):
You will not that none of the vehicles were loaded.
I think that this should be 'note' in place for 'not'
A minor point to the layout:
The yellow text for warnings is very difficult to read when printing the tutorial on my printer - maybe red would have been an alternative choice?
To prevent any misunderstandings:
The tutorial is great, easy to follow and at the same time very informative. It probably contains fewer typos than this post, I just want to help exterminating the few remaining typos.
Kind regards,
Roland