Crappy blurb

[Neilster]

Could we fix the blurb for MWIF in the game threads?

"World in Flames is the computer version of Australian Design Group classic board game. World In Flames is a highly detailed game covering the both Europe and Pacific Theaters of Operations during World War II. If you want grand strategy this game is for you."

Can I suggest an apostrophe "s" on the end of "Group"? And while I enjoy playing "the both Europe and Pacific Theatres of Operations", it should probably be "both the European and Pacific theatres of operations" (Note: no capitals in the last bit). Maybe a comma after "strategy" too, for a short pause to build the tension. [:'(]

It currently sounds like a Chinese instruction manual and is hardly going to help attract intelligent browsers who might be interested in the game but don't know WiF.

Cheers, Neilster

[Toed]

... and perhaps some more/new screenshots?

[Neilster]

Umm...it's still unchanged. Still crappy. [;)]

Cheers, Neilster

[Shannon V. OKeets]

ORIGINAL: Neilster

Umm...it's still unchanged. Still crappy. [;)]

Cheers, Neilster

But it worded special for attract growing Chinese marketplacement!

[Neilster]

ORIGINAL: Shannon V. OKeets

ORIGINAL: Neilster

Umm...it's still unchanged. Still crappy. [;)]

Cheers, Neilster

But it worded special for attract growing Chinese marketplacement!

Hurry need we have to make for sure big changes [:D]

Cheels, Nee Zhur

[Shannon V. OKeets]

ORIGINAL: Neilster

ORIGINAL: Shannon V. OKeets

ORIGINAL: Neilster

Umm...it's still unchanged. Still crappy. [;)]

Cheers, Neilster

But it worded special for attract growing Chinese marketplacement!

Hurry need we have to make for sure big changes [:D]

Cheels, Nee Zhur

I'll send Erik Rutkins replacement text and some better screen shots.

[Shannon V. OKeets]

Text is done. I am working on new screen shots.

[Neilster]

谢谢，那将有一个很大的改进 [:'(]

送上我最好的祝福
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[mlees]

ORIGINAL: Neilster

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Well.

That's easy for you to say...

[dale1066]

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is that good luck to the english lads in the final on saturday ?

[composer99]

Neilster's original post turns up fine on my browser.
 
Not that I have any idea what it means, of course.

[wosung]

ORIGINAL: Neilster

谢谢，那将有一个很大的改进 [:'(]

送上我最好的祝福
约瑟夫

That means:

"Thank you, there is a vast improvement.
Submitting my best wishes
Yao Sefu [Ernst John(son) or Josephson]... [Western name]."

Regards

[Neilster]

The secret's out. The Neilster's real name is Joey. [:)]

Cheers, Neilster

[Shannon V. OKeets]

Up-to-date screen shots have been posted on the Matrix web site for WMIF. I will try to get them to remove the 2 screen shots from last year.

[Neilster]

Looks good. It's a pity Matrix's screen shots are so small.

Cheers, Neilster

[AndersOK]

I have a minor correction to one of the screenshots (Germany declares war on Belgium - 1940).
I the sea box, a german sub is shown in the '3' box, but as it only has a movment of 3 it should only be able to reach the '2' box.

AOK

[mlees]

ORIGINAL: AndersOK

I have a minor correction to one of the screenshots (Germany declares war on Belgium - 1940).
I the sea box, a german sub is shown in the '3' box, but as it only has a movment of 3 it should only be able to reach the '2' box.

AOK

Sorry. That was me. I bumped the table...