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ORIGINAL: Extraneous
24.4.6 Decline and fall: Allied ascendancy Part 1 (critique)
Thanks, Extraneous. I won't respond to any points that are just attaboys, although I do appreciate them.
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1. You did not list what options you selected. This makes it hard for the reader to tell what rules are in force.
Uhh.. I thought I had done that by showing screenshots? See posts #5 through 11.
Now, I will cop to not explaining any optional rules, which maybe I should have done (at least for particularly obscure ones). On the whole, though, I'd rather leave that for when people ask me about an optional rule and/or why I did/did not pick it.
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6. Why didn't you post a Grand Strategy for China?
Again, I thought I had - see posts #22-24. It might not be a very good set of grand strategy posts, but it's there.
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4. Post #36 (China) it would have been better to show the hex control flags.
That is a good point. I had wanted to reduce clutter because it was a "big picture" screen capture, but that is information that should have been on it, either by toggling hex control or manipulating the screen capture to show it some other way.
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7. Post #50, #54, and #56 (Japan) Your Grand Strategy for Japan (an overview).
I assume there was either an "attaboy" or a "gotcha" meant to be included in this comment?
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10. Post #59, 60, and 61 The China Fronts. There was no need for the screenshots a simple narrative would have sufficed. You already posted the screenshots
Perhaps, but the screenshots posted earlier did not have Japanese units set up on them, and I would rather post new screenshots than make readers scroll or click back on the thread to see old ones, especially if they don't contain the information I want them to show (the Japanese positions).
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11. Post #73 Your Grand Strategy for Germany, Italy, and their minors (an overview). No need for the Global Situation map nothing has changed yet. You could have used less screenshots if you had focused on areas like Norway, Finland, All of France, all of Germany, and etc.
Re: the global situation map, again, I prefer that people keep reading than to have to scroll or click back; furthermore I posted about the German set up a day or two after Japan's. That said, on further reflection I concede that it didn't really need repeating.
Re: the quantity of screenshots, that is largely a function of the screen size limitation of my laptop. If I had a bigger monitor, it would not be as much of an issue. Otherwise, a valid point.
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14. Don't use German words without following them with a definition (i.e. German Ostheer).
Fair point, at least for a word like Ostheer (and is applicable for other foreign tongues). When even the History Channel uses Luftwaffe, I figure I can let that one slide, though.
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15. Post #103 These are the only peripheral theatres?
From the perspective of the USSR, yes. Burma, for example, is a peripheral theatre overall, but not one the USSR has any interest in.
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16. Post #104 excellent idea to show the Partisan tables. Does this include China?
The partisan table as a whole does; however as Chinese partisans are friendly to the Allies China doesn't show up with the filter I used turned on.
(Parenthetically, I didn't get a chance with this first AAR to set up partisans (which happens after all other units are set up) so I didn't really talk about partisans in general; had I reached that stage I would have, and intend to with version 2 of the AAR.)
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17. Why didn't you post a Grand Strategy for the USSR?
Hmm... good catch. I posted the overall summary (with obligatory comic book reference) and left it at that without going into detail. My bad.
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18. No comments on strategy you make the decisions you live with the results.
Fair enough. Allied player Composer99 will get to take full advantage of any errors made by Axis player Composer99, and vice-versa.
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My over all view of this AAR is very favorable but it is slightly disorganized.
In my defence, I was doing these setups and writing this AAR, more often than not, when I ought to have been sleeping. [>:]
(Also, I'm not the most organized person in the world, just look at my desk... no, no nothing to see here, move along!


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It heavily focuses on the plans of the Axis while is less informative with the Allied intentions.
Yes, although ending it before getting to the set up of the US/CW/France is I dare say a principal reason for that. I certainly hope to remedy the lack in version 2.
Thanks again for your input!