No disrespect but I noticed that text in a few of the 1939 Scenario events could use a little tweaking.
Apologies if this isn't the correct forum or if this has been mentioned before.
Event ~1940-03-15
Finland concedes its border territory to the USSR. Finland will join the March 13th, 1941.
USSR Winter War Losses: 50 PP, 50 OP, 50 manpower. USSR Gains: buffer territory on Leningrad.
Here's my suggestion on how to improve it:
Finland concedes its border territory to the USSR. Finland will join the Axis on March 13th, 1941.
USSR Winter War Losses: 50 production points and 50 manpower. USSR Gains: buffer territory around Leningrad.
Not sure what the 50 OP is so I removed it. (might it be remnant from a previous version?)
Event ~1940-08-30
Romania yields Southern Dobruja to the Bulgaria as part of Bulgaria's deal to join the Axis.
Romania yields Transylvania to the Hungary.
Fixed:
Romania yields Southern Dobruja to Bulgaria as part of Bulgaria's deal to join the Axis.
Romania yields Transylvania to Hungary.
Event ~1941-03-14
the USA begins Lend Lease to the UK gearing up further for war.
ANZAC reinforcements arrive in Cairo to reinforce Egypt
Here's my suggestion on how to improve it:
The USA gears up further for war.
ANZAC reinforcements arrive in Port Said to reinforce Egypt.
Note:
the USA (with a lowercase 't' is in more events as well)
USA multiple does increase by ~0.07 but the Lend Lease of 20 resources to the UK already began on ~1941-01-03.
The ANZAC unit doesn't arrive in Cairo but at or within one hex of Port Said. If no room for it is available, it can only be deployed the next turn in the UK.
I'm certain there's more but stepping through the events in game is tedious. Is there a file with all the events in the install that I can take a look at if possible?
I'm cutting my teeth against Nirosi and PL1
Having a blast too!