Typos & disfluencies

[Elver]

I'm not seeing any particular place to post these sorts of minor issues, so to avoid thread clutter I'd propose any time someone finds one they post it here, along with the version it came from, and the version the game started in. I'll start.

Scenario build 1.20h, game build 1.20o:
In the (positive) resolution of the Cultural Exchange of special refugees decision, the major regime who's sending the refugees is referred to by the variable name.

[Magirot]

[1.20s] Description of the Banker Ally Fate Stratagem reads:

• I will charge no interest. Impose no repayments. Le me help you...

[Magirot]

[1.20s]

SE_Perks library, Perks table

Row 4
(Small Degraded AF), typo in description:

• What the ancients consider small, is actually extremely humungous for our times. The problem is this Automated Factory spawning several square kilometers is in ruins and severely degraded. However it has some minor systems operational and a sizeable production capability. IP +80.

spawning should be spanning
("humongous" would look more standard than "humungous"? Also would probably be fine without "extremely"!)


Row 5
(Hermits Cave), name:

• Hermits Cave should be Hermit's Cave, I think? Though Google gives results without the apostrophe I think it's nonstandard.

Row 7
(Ancient Luxury Resort), typos in description:

• Hidden between the natural curves of the landscape and ancient luxury resort is still semi-operational. It has hot-baths and still operational entertainment suites. Your leaders love the privilleg to visit. PP +1.

"and" should be "an"; privilege typo


Row 8
(Monastry), name and description:

• Monastry should be Monastery, both in name and description.

(only the last one has bothered me but I thought it might be better to try to go over the whole table in one go)

[PersonyPerson]

Here's some typo's I've noticed. I might be being pedantic, but might as well keep a record of them.

[1.20q]

MTH wants more embedded staff event:"burocratic" should be "bureaucratic"



Minor regime demands an oath of peace event: reject it, you get the below message. "severly" should be "severely"



National Budget allocation event: A space just before "Your Council Directors" and "eachother" should be "each other". Add a "the" between win and budget?



MTH offering to buy IP event: accept it and get the below message. "upto" should be "up to."

[Magirot]

Colonize screen, message for Disband if you've selected a Zone other than the SHQ Zone:

• You have x Recruits at SHQ. Upon disbanding they will join the Population of the Zone where the SHQ is present. You have Recruits, but you cannot Disband them in the selected Zone. Please select the Zone where the SHQ is present Disband Recruits.

Should have "to" before the last two words.

[Magirot]

I wonder if Oceania Planetary Class Artica is supposed to be Arctica?

[Moat_Man]

I wonder if Oceania Planetary Class Artica is supposed to be Arctica?

I wondered that myself.

[mroyer]

I wonder if Oceania Planetary Class Artica is supposed to be Arctica?

I wondered that myself.

I've been reading it as Arctica and didn't even notice it didn't have the 'c' until just now...

[Emx77]

Subvocalizer Tower asset (in description)

Produces: 2 popHapiness, 2 workerHapiness, should be 2 popHappiness, 2 workerHappiness.

[Vic]

Thanks guys. Will make a pass soon.

[Hardradi]

Minor typo on both the casualty lines:

[Moat_Man]

Minor typo in the history log of a governor.

Staid should be Stayed

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[alocritani]

[1.20q #174]Constant name in HighCommand detail window tooltip (and the link itself is Formula1 that seems another placeholder)

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[Magirot]

Transport Contract dialog box text reads "Howmany" instead of "How many", though with the full sentence it would probably be better if it was

"How much transport capacity for how long a period of time would you like to contract?"




Meanwhile, in the unit upgrade, scrap and replace dialogs, it'd just need a space.

[alocritani]

[1.21d] Bluepint screen for aircraft/copters

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range is too small

[alocritani]

Too insted of to, delegate screen

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[alocritani]

Shadow spy feat's tooltip says a Special Ops skill roll bonus is applied but the skill is called Covert ops.

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[Magirot]

Should be "proper" and "breach".

[alocritani]

That's from bottom bar, zone tab, zone administration mode butto: should be unincorporated

[Magirot]

1.21h, assumedly in j too:



First row reads "guys" instead of "guy".